Monday, September 13, 2010

Story Writing

In the white land forest on a cold winters night, the animals were tucked in bed all snug an tight. Ready for hibernation the animals were ,they were so warm it made them purr. Mr Croak the frog under a rock his door shut and locked tight,Mrs Hare and her children little Mandy ,Spike and Rocky to asleep in there burrow the size was just right, Polly the possum with no time to spare jumped in to bed and felt she could sleep for a year. Gary the goose in his bushy house sleeping happily as quiet as a mouse,Nutty the squirrel eating a nut early time for bed her fur in a ruck, Mr and Mrs porky the porcupine's in bed they fell asleep as soon as the pi-lo touched there head. So the animals in bed not a sound except for the wind blowing raffishly around.

2 weeks later

‘Wake up’ said rocky to his mum ‘what’s wrong’ she said ‘it’s what’s outside it’s white and thick I’m scared.’ ‘ Don’t worry rocky it’s probably just hail’ ‘No it’s thicker than that it’s thicker and whiter and it’s coming down more slow.’ ‘Don't worry your head I’ll go check it ok?’ and rocky smiled back. So she walked to the window and screamed snow the legends coming true so she ran to the children and hugged them tight waiting for the worst. Mr croak called everybody to the bunker so they rushed to the bunker and closed the door and waited two months.

2 months later

They opened the door to the bright sun they had survived and they lived happily ever after.

1 comment:

  1. I liked the rhymes at the start of the story. And the names of the animals. Cool story fergus


    Casey

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